Much more on target for our product. Would like to see more entries utilizing these colors, and incorporating a theme which features a rail system. Very nice early submission. Looking forward to more choices. Thank you.
#19 is our current favorite. Can you close the space between the two pieces of wood? Also, can you move the spring and the joint to the left? Centering the joint above and between the "r" and the "i"?
Would you like the rail to be completely connected or do you like the separation (between the two separate pieces)? I'll make the changes you are suggesting, and thank you for the feedback. It's nice to have a direction.
In #18 I left the outline on the railing, do you like the way that looks, or would you rather have no outline such as in #19, #20? Obviously you prefer #19, #20 by ranking, but would you like to see the joint? This is what an outline would show you, other than the grain differences at where they join.
Thank you for the terrific designs with a concept that incoporates our product. With an innovative product such as Spring Bolt, it's sometimes best to show the product wherever possible (such as in its logo). Other times, it's best to be vague in order to generate curiosity and interest. Entry #6 is vague enough it should generate curiosity from stair builders. Entry #20 includes our product, in use, and immediately answers the question, "What does your product do?", This also works nicely with our tagline, "The Improved Wood Rail and Newel Post Fastener!" Can we see another version of entry #20 with the joint? Also, can you emphasize the word "IMPROVED" in our tagline with bold, italicized and underlined text? Or, perhaps whatever you feel works best? Thank you for your terrific designs.