I would prefer not to have the emblem, and some sort of intertwining of the S and C, I like the swirls you did on KC Constructors, Thanks for entering.
#227, I think I like this one, I'll run it by a few partners and get some feed back for you, later I might use the Leterform mark separately from the Word Mark below, so we might want to spice up the "Sports Club 24" Maybe put a gradiant or something on the S C and 24, maybe black outline, white letter. Very cool, Thanks, Carter.
Good job on the options, here's how we think they should go together. 1. Use #245 for font type and layout of "SPORTS CLUB 24" 2. on #240, #241, and #243 I like how the Letterform mark of SC24 is outlined, I think that gives it a good dimension. The S and the 24 should be the same color, Black outline, with white fill. The C maybe black outline , red fill. 3. For "SPORTS CLUB 24" , "S" Black outline,slight red glow, white fill, and the same for the "C" and "24" for the rest "PORTS" and "LUB" Black outline, White fill.
I hope this works and makes sense, thanks, Carter.
For the Word Mark "SPORTS CLUB 24" I think the font size is too large and takes the emphasise from the Letterform mark "SC24" So if you could make the SC24 bigger and the SPORTSCLUB 24 Smaller that would be better I think.
For "Sports Club 24" we need to change color back to Black fill. And maybe try something to make the S,C, and 24 In "SPORTS CLUB 24" stand out slightly, maybe thin outline of color, what ever you think looks best.
Sorry, forgot one thing. See how in #245 none of the letters touch each other in "SPORTS CLUB 24" We prefer this clear separation, instead of them running into each other, Thanks again.
Working from #289 could you make "SPORTS CLUB 24" a little smaller, what ever size you think so that the logo has the main focus. Then could you try a little red outline or something on the S,C and 24 in "SPORTS CLUB 24" Thanks.
#302 the concept is right, emphasizing the SC and 24 but the look didn't come out what I expected, maybe you can play with the fonts, spacing, and empahasis and come up with what will work, Thank you very much, the concept is perfect, just needs some refinement.
Probally should remove the red outline from the little "24" in the letterform mark.
#311 Color is right, empahsis is right, just the red outline looks a little strange, The way you outlined in #305 is better, more of a glow or gradient, not just a red line. Thanks.
#313 is the best, the black letters got thined out, they should be a bit thicker. If you have any ideas or thoughts on improvement, please let me know. Thank You.
#301 is still the best, the new ones don't have the general font and look, I don't know yet exactly how to improve but I will let you know. I really like the "nike" type look in #301, don't know if you should spin it or incorporate something into it. Thanks.