Sports Club 24Logo Design Contest

Thanks for your invitation.
Here is my first concept for your review.
your feedback is always welcome.
thx

(This comment references Entry #216)

Thanks, I would go with #222 or #221, #217 and #216 are just not our style. I would like the S to extend above and below the c so that it clearly is an s. Thanks.

#434 looks good, would like all caps on sports and club, with first s and c slightly larger than "ports" and "lub" Thanks.

Thanks for your feedback.
Here are updates per your request.
thx

(This comment references Entry #440)