Hi Suke. I like what you were trying to convey here. Could you please find a way to simplify it a bit, and try to not use a spine? I'd love to see something more creative. Thanks! Marissa
we would prefer not having eyes in the logo and also something less busy as with the 3 panels in #3 and 14 just one picture would be nice that conveys movement and connection like #17 but with a different picture