Hi, I like #8 that you created. Can you make a couple changes: - In the top right hand (leg) can you place a dumbbell there, instead of the cards. Then in the lower right hand, where the dumbbell is, can you put a shopping bag. - Put 2 eyes instead of 4. - The slogan needs to be a little bigger so it is readable.
Additional Variations: I like the spider you came up with, but I would also like to see it in a couple different layouts, mainly horizontally. If you look at Entry #9 I like how the spider is to the left of the words. Another version you could try is to have the spider hanging like on Entry #9 but using your spider. If you can incorporate the tag that would be good.
For all of the additional variations you make, I would like to keep the blue/yellow color scheme like on #8, that looks good.
Thanks for your entries and hard work. I am very impressed with what you have presented so far and think that we can make some minor changes and get a winner!
I like what you did for #11. Can you make a couple small changes: - Can you make the word "Saver" the same color blue as the spider. - This is going to sound picky, but I would like to see some changes with the items he is holding. Can you lower the bag of groceries down some, and above the bag remove the pink comb and put the towel there. Where the towel currently is, lets put a waiter's tray (like you see in entry 9) so his left top arm would be holding up the tray.
I think that would be it. I would have to show it to my partner for one last final review but I think you accomplished what we wanted to have built.
Hi, we still keep going back to #8 and liking that one. The spider character for #8 comes across the best to the people I show it to. Can we try making a couple changes to #8. For starters I really need the graphic to be more horizontal than vertical. Can you take the spider from #8 and make him a little bit smaller and put the text "Spider Saver" to the right of the spider. I like the spider saver text and colors that you did in entry #16 . The other changes would be put the dumbbell where the cards are, so he is holding the dumbbell up high. Also, can you have him holding a shopping back that hangs, instead of holding up a paper bag. For example, it would be a bag shaped like this, http://www.cesidebtsolutions.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/online-retailers-shopping-bags.jpg and from the same side angle.
When you make the changes above can I see it with a white background and can I see one with the tag type background you did in #8 but the tag would be left to right instead of up and down.
Thanks for your hard work, if you have any questions let me know.
#28 looks perfect. I want to shorten the slogan so you can make it bigger so it is easier to read. Can you change it to " Searching the Web for All the Best Deals " and make it a little bigger.
Also, we were curious to see what the spider would look like with a red "SS" on his chest for SpiderSaver like a super hero would have. Nothing to bright that will make it look real busy, something subtle if you can. Could you make one with that on it so we can compare.