Spaces HawaiiLogo Design Contest

I change the font

Yes! That looks nice. I'm wondering if adding windows and/or a door to the house may help add some contrast? Also let's try making the waves a deeper "ocean" blue.
Much appreciated!

like this?

Similar, try a simple black bird. As simple of a bird as possible. Like in this link. But filled in black. https://goo.gl/images/beXWne

what do you means like this?

Aloha! How about we turn the top of the palm tree into a simple bird leading the stroke. turn the green into orange (to represent the sun). The Word 'SPACES' should be large. the word "Hawaii" should be small and under the main name (Spaces). Tag line in black underneath it all using the same font

Thanks! Jonathan

thank you for your feedback, I have submith some variation please check and feedback. thanks

I like the idea but would like to see how this can be fine tuned to relate more to my industry of real estate in Hawaii.