#150 is beautiful. My favourite of your submissions. Is there a way you could give a bit more definition to the centre of your flower and have the green words either a little darker or a little thicker to show up better? Well done!
#166 FANTASTIC!! Can you thicken up the word Enhance just a bit more to help the word pop more. I'm also wanting to see what it would look like with the word Spa in blue (like the deep blue used in your water droplet in #96) and keeping everything else the same. Even a bit more resolution on the petals on the flower would be fabulous!! Great job - look forward to your edits!!
#172 - Wow! Can you make the blue lettering more crisp/vibrant (less pale) to make the words stand out more. That may mean making it a bit darker and/or a bit thicker. I didn't quite see more resolution on the petals...were you able to define the petals more? I just find a bit blurry. If possible, that would be wonderful. FYI: I'm working on a tag line right now and once it's in stone, I will send it to you to but underneath in smaller lettering in italics. Maybe starting thinking of what the best colour would be for the tag line underneath. Great work!!!!!
Hi there Punk-G. My logo is in need of a tag line before contest is finished and I've finally come up with one. Here is is: The Finer Details of Excellence This will go under the logo in a much smaller font and re. colour, my guess would be to go with the purple. What do you think? If you could kindly add this tag line underneath #172 #166 #211 and #212 The size you have chosen for the .com is PERFECT!
#211 Something funny comes on my screen when I look at this one - it looks as though there is a thin hazy line going through the the middle of the entire set of words. Was this intentional or maybe my computer? A solid colour of this blue is preferred opposed to shading which I *think* is being used - hard to tell. Thank you soooo much!
Hi Punk-G #222 Good! Can you please change the tag line to normal text (not italics) and lower it a bit to give more white space. It seems just a little too close to the word enhance. Tag line just a hint larger. #220 - same thing.
#259 - Before the time runs out: I find the tag line too faint and small - please enlarge it somehow. Also, can you try a different font because the over logo looks a "too stiff". Something more flowing would be optimal. The arial font might work but I'm not sure. Can you make the blues a solid, deep aqua that really stands out? I find it just a little faint as well. You may also want to send a version with a purple tag line (instead of blue) Go go go Punk-G!!! Can't wait to see your last minute touches before the contest runs out! Thanks, Keys505
Hello Punk-G - thank you for sending these. #447 Can you please make that little swirl around the word spa to pink. Right now it is blue. Can you make the .com just a little bit more bold in both #447 and #448 #447 Can you send a different revision of this with a grey tag line (instead of blue) #447 & #448 can you try some different yet similar fonts. I find the Capital E to be very plain. Play around with italics and/or fonts with more interesting capital letters. I do like your new versions with upper and lower case letters (not all caps). Thanks you very much - these are great! Keys505
Hi Thanks for quick revisions. Can you try a different font altogether for #468 and $448? (which are my favourites) I'm not that keen on the extra flourishes that were put on the capital letters. A different font may do the trick. (The letters should be elegant on their own with no need to add details to them because they will compete with the flower). Thanks, Keys505
Hi Punk-G #478 Can you please make the grey words solid in colour (instead of the shaded from dark to light) and move the tag line down just a little bit please. I like the new font. Thanks.
#439 - can you make the words spa and .com a darker gray (almost black like what you used in the stem) #439 - can you make one where the stem from the flower is green that then blends into the pink swirl of the circle #438 - try with a green stem too $438 - try with darker gray (almost black) on spa and .com This is the last kick at the can - send as many versions as you can - I have to select the winner in less than 12 hours. Thanks Punk-G. Great work!
#526 Spa and .com are great - they really stand out and are easy to read. Any way to make the word enhande crisper now, to pop as much as the other words (not bolder, just more defined to stand out). #438 - make everything just a little bit darker #439 - same thing, make everything just a little bit darker Thank you. These are my favourite designs. Congrats!