Dear LuckyKid Thanks for great submissions. #324 If you have time, can you slightly increase the size text of both the domain name and the tag line. And make the word spa and .com just a shade bolder/thicker (I love the blue colour you chose.) #382 Same thing. Nice work - hope to seet these revisions before the contest ends! Keys505
Hi Kent Thanks for your great revisions. #343 - Great. the increased size of domain and tagline are better. Your initial idea though of keeping the word spa and .com less bold I think was the right one - now that I see them bolded a bit more, I find it competes with the word enhance. Can you please send another and keep everything the same but with a shade less bold on those 2 words. Can you also send one where the 's' in spa is lowercase just to see if it helps the word enhance pop a little more. Tag line black maybe? or that deep brown you used in enhance. #346 Can you make the word enhance one of the darker blues used in the graphic (i.e.tip of 2nd top leaf) to help make the word enhance pop a bit more. The colour it is now, is too similar in quality to the colour on the word spa. Thank you for any work you can do before the contest ends. Keys505
Ran out of time but if you choose my design I can still make modifications that you need. Right at the end our newborn started to cry so I just missed your latest requests.
Hi Luckykid #453 Would you mind sending a version or 2 of this with a green similar to the leaf in #326 (not your design). #453 is so strong. I'm wondering how we can make the word enhance pop a bit more...a bit more bold? or brighter? what do you think? #462 - same. #429 is also very nice. Can you make the blue a little darker but not as dark as #463 (somewhere in between). Thanks you! Keys505
Hi Kent, #486 I think this is my favourite colour of the bunch. I really like it but the logo looks very 'corporate' for me. If possible, I'd like a mix of corporate as well as artistic look (if you look at the others in the top 5). If you want to experiment with the graphic a bit that would be nice so that it's not so clean-cut. thanks Kent. I look forward to your revisions! Keys505
Hi Kent - thank you for your new revisions - appreciated! I like the new graphic much more because you can see the flower more clearly! And making the words upper and lower case really helped to make it look more clean and artistic! (I actualy find it easier to read now too which is great) I was wondering about having even more fun with the graphic - like some of the petals coming 'out of' the box/square to give the graphic more uniqueness. #458 (the pink/purple) can you make it similar to #510 currently just to see what it looks like? Thanks so much, Keys505
Hi Kent Thanks for submissions. #463 - can you please make the tag line to go all way across the bottom instead of stopping at the .com to see what that looks like -insert different graphic with maybe a flower or non-cactus looking plant (not sharp ended petals or a sun) Right now I get the feeling the graphic is very plain. If you can spice it up with some silver, some shading using different colours that would help a lot #453 - tag line across entire bottom #519 is very nice but the colours and graphic are similar to the company's logo responsible for that big oil spill in the gulf- want to stay away from those 2 colours!! Maybe try green plant (non-cactus looking) and blue background like the sky Thank you!
Still got my fingers crossed that you pick mine. I think the feeling of it is more spa like, the relaxed pampered emotions you get rather than like a flower shop.