Thats an interesting try... I haven't really seen any others yet to compare against... so let me see what else others have to offer... I do like the cursive S, but I don't like the 3 different fonts you used...
I had very specific reasons for using the three fonts that I did. If you wish to question my credentials, send me a private message and I will give you three words to enter into a Google search box that will return over 50,000 hits to verify them.