Hi there! I think this design (#25) has definite potential. To me it reminds me of the olympic or cascade mountain ranges which are beautiful and could be really cool to capture in a logo, perhaps with a sunset behind. My worry with the fine lines of the sun is that they won't show up in print so perhaps a more abstract sunset might work well. Additionally, the logo reads a bit older to me so if there was any way to make it more modern that would be awesome! Thank you for submitting.