I like where it's going, but looking for more ornate, more Swirls like in Calligraphy, and traditional (less modern looking) script looking SS, and without the heads.
Can I see #57 with gold and navy on a white background? Also can you provide some variations? I really like that it looks like dancing and movement, but it looks a little modern to me. If you can play with this concept, and maybe have the two S's facing each other, or dipping, or in various positions, and maybe elongated movement. It is close, but a little cold. If you can add just a little bit of frill to it. Please look at rankings for preferred color choices.