Hi Tilly,
Thanx for your concepts and understanding our requirements. Here's our feedback:
1. FONT TYPE - can you try using a more common font like Arial, Helvetica, Georgia, Times New Roman, etc?
2. REFLECTION - can you add a reflection under the logo text
3. EMPLOYERS - add the text employers under the sonewe text
4. Can you try to do a Wordmark like in the Logotournament samples under Wordmark logos.
5. The image logo should be much simpler like the Sprint Logo. It has too much going on right now and it's too "sharp" like you can attack someone with it hehhe.
Good job on the silverish/greyish color.
Thanx,
sonewe