I like this a lot, but perhaps you could work on something on the swoosh next to the 4 and the v, perhaps you could use something that more closely mirrors the dots on our logo for SBS. Also could I get a view of it without the e at the end. Also could you put on the bottom instead of solve for X."a division of SBS.
Love this. I tried to comment on this before. Fo you think it would look good with the dots around it from our logo for the swoosh and checkmark? Also can you mock one up removing the e from solve? also can you put under it A division of SBS?