We like the font and size of the Name and tag line. We also like that the image of the shoe is abstract and not literal. We like the idea of the sun and water, but we don't think the image conveys the image of a "shoe" clearly enough. The shoe seems to get lost in the image because of the arch. Also, given the idea of the sun and water, as well as the name harbor- we would like to see some blue in the image.
first of all i would like to thank you for the feedback given, i will be submitting the adjustments to #1 entry ASAP i seriously recommend you to rank any entry so it can appear at the portfolio this will give you more promotion to your contest and for sure more positive results.
Entry #2: We like the changes image of the shoe. It is more recognizable. I would like to see what Entry #2 would look like with the two-tones that you used in the arch in Entry #1 either in the orange/gold or in a blue/lighter blue. Also, the yellow streaks around the top of the shoe make us think of a light bulb. Is there anything that you can change about the streaks to make them seem more like sun streaks and less like a light bulb streaks? We are open to removing the yellow streaks altogether as well.
Both the sunstreaks #5 and no sunstreaks #6 logos look great. The last thing we are looking for would be any variations to the shoe laces that might make the shoes look less cartoonish. Maybe some more detail or holes for the laces?
Ok let's work out shoes laces detail now, ASAP will be submitting new choices including holes for the laces, using sunstreaks and without them, thanks.
I like the darker blue and the fade out in the image. Can you submit #65 exactly the same but with all the letters in the brown and no blue. Thank you.
Also can you submit #65 with the "Soleharbor" in brown letters and the "we rejuvenate your soles" in blue. And another of the same with the simple shoe laces in #5.
My colleague wants to see entry #67 with a shorter arch and he doesn't like the points on the arch. Can you shorten the arch and round the tips of the arch a little? I would also like to see "we rejuvenate your soles" in #67 in a slightly darker blue.