#48 is very nice but adding the weapon is too much I think. ALso could you use thicker lines in a brush stroke style like this: http://www.okr1964.org/tamo-detail.jpg
Thanks for feedback and ranked, #71 remove weapon and thicker lines in a brush. I hope you like, if anything need to modified dont hesitate to tell me.
Hi, when ink is applied to the paper it sometimes "breakes" Maybe you can use that effect to create te black face, and use more "realistic" brush strokes for the rest.
Hi, thanks for details feedback I am really appreciate. I try to use breaks effect to create the black face and more realistic brush, If any direction dont hesitate to tell.