Soaring with AngelsLogo Design Contest

Hi, Here is my submissions (#10, #11, #12). Hopefully pleased.
Please feel free co contact me for any requests.Thanks .
Best Regards.

#10, #12
Quite a nice design - and color choice. What can be done to make the feathers appear less wispy?

OK. I'll do the revision now. And I will submit it ASAP shortly. Thanks

Hello,
I am still interested in your design. Would like to see more strength in the wings.
Thank you.

Hi shamstabriz,
Thanks for still interested my designs. I promise that I will do give you my best.
I'll make do any revision on the wings. And I will submit it ASAP. Thank you.
Best Regards,
Rafa

Here's my updates (#51, #52, #53, #54, #55, #56, #57) for the revision & variations.
Please let me know if you need any changes/modification again. Thanks

Hi Rafa,
Nice job with #57.
My thoughts:
--can you make the figure less descript, more abstract?
--would you try removing the tips of the wings where the feathers protrude, leaving it more abstract?
--can you create a funnel cloud (tornado-like) that descends from the heavens through the top of the figure?
Thank you.
S