Smoke WaterfowlLogo Design Contest

did you need other revision?

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and here the version of red accent include on waterfowl from the entry of #17

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already add the red to the word waterfowl on entry #19

I already put the red on waterfowl here...
you want to full red on it?

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Yes, now add the red to the word Waterfowl. we love this!

little thin line on eyes and waterfowl
any other suggestion?

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please check my revision on entry #19

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Yes, was only wanting a very thin line of red on the eyes, also can you add the red to the word "waterfowl" as well?

revision.
change the color of eyes and little bit red accent on SMOKE word.
am I in right direction?

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thanks for your feedback.
you can check your request on entry #17
please take a look..

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And maybe a little red (very very little) highlights on the wording?

Hello, really like this!!! Could you add a little red line next to the white in his eyes? Kinda make him look a little crazy? I still want the white, but just a very small spot, what I did above is not correct, you are the artist, I think you'll understand

Hi Flangley
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

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