Hey Jonny,
Just a couple of comments! We wondered if you would be able to focus more around the logo, so say for example if the logo didn't have the copy present you would still be able to recognise what it stood for, hope that makes sense!!
Entry 58: Please could we see the hats next to straight text?
Entry 60: Please would you be able to have a look at the images on the right hand side of the copy? Still with a background.
We would really like to see pantone 371 on the green as well, if poss?
Thanks