Please illustrate the back of the train to look more like a train instead of a color block, and make the tracking of the word STATION higher so that it aligns with the word WINDSOR. The font size for STATION will need to be smaller in order for it to align with WINDSOR.
Sir, could you please provide me the train image in PDF? I have problem to open it correctly because im using the older version of Adobe Illustration
Thank you in advance
The addition of the blue sky is very nice. Would you please edit this versions based on the comments we have put together in a sketch up found at this link: https://www.sonomamarintrain.org/file/3431
Please try colorizing the people in the orange color or a similar shade. Add a pony tail to the bicyclist to make the cyclist appear to be female. Adjust the outer orange border so that the ends do not compete with the orange ribbon over the logo. Thank you.
Please recolor the people so that they are not blended with the hills. Make one of the people appear to be female. Colorizing the people with the orange or a similar color may work well to make the people stand out from the background.
can you please remove the light poles and also connect the pathway segments so it is not broken up like a sidewalk (it is all one path). can you also add a pedestrian and a cyclist on the path walking towards the viewer? can you also reduce the negative space at the top of the logo and move the train up a bit, thanks!
can you please remove the light poles and also connect the pathway segments so it is not broken up like a sidewalk (it is all one path). can you also add a pedestrian and a cyclist on the path walking towards the viewer? can you also reduce the negative space at the top of the logo, and allow the slogan to be a bit taller. thanks!
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is that correct?
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https://ibb.co.com/HT1R7d9z
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Thank you in advance
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Ok, im on it
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i slightly made a tweaks for colors, please check #116
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