I like this design but wonder whether color should be changed? Remember, women will be the majority of those purchasing product. Another thought: the logo will need to wrap around a pen (much like a flair tim marker). Will this take up too much room on the pen? For this reason alone, I am more interested in entry 15 rather than #14 because #14 will take too much space. The logo and name will need to be on the same line - approximately. Good work, though!
Thanx for the feedback. Submitting some options with different colors which will appeal to women and reduced the size of the icon so that it can rightly be placed on small objects like pens as you said. If you want any other variation alteration. Feel free to ask