Sleep Information SystemsLogo Design Contest

Hi, thx for the invite, here is my entry, hope you like it.
Let me know your thoughts..

Cheers,

Mare

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Here it is.

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Reversed colors.

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Mare,

Could you make the center ball have an octagon pattern but yet keep it in a sphere so it looks like a bee hive?

It was also suggested that if you think it would look good make the center ball a honey comb color????

Also it was pointed out that the center ball wasn't centered however you may have a perfect reason for this as a designer.

Thanks again.

Here are some new ones per your request.

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Mare,

Please Make #64's center sphere a honey comb color with the same color as #44. I like what you did with the #63 submission but i think it is a little more golden than honey comb.

thank you.

Mare,

Can you make #67's colors not so bright? I like the color depth and shading of the #44 submission. The difference with yours is that the center would be totally covered but i did like that the lines in-between had another color so you could see better what you were looking at. As far as color depth goes I know you can match it up. The honey comb color looked a little bright??? (I don't know if I'm saying it correct).

Like this?

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Make the inside more of a deeper metal color like #44 and make the lines that color in between the honeycomb color instead of that white as it would pop out more. please feel free to adjust the blue and green to compliment the change of the inside colors as well. I'm getting some very good feed back on your designs!!!!!

Mare, i don't like 70 and 71 as well as the others you have done only because you did better ones already.

Mare make the octagon the orange looking color and the lines the steel gray color that way it pops out.

#74 Just keep the outside a smooth solid color and keep the inside with the design keeping it orange honeycomb in color with the steel gray color. also the inside area that is that silver color could be the same as the lines in between the octagon color.

Am i making myself easy to understand?

Mare,

I like the color of #44's depth of honeycomb color as I want it a little richer and the lines in-between a little darker so it will pop more. also the inside that you have in that silver color make that the same as the color in-between the lines. again if you need to adjust the blue and green to make it work that's ok as well.

thanks again for all your hard work!!!

we are getting there. please make the color a little deeper and the silver more grey or steele color like design #44

Its a bit hard to understand you but i think i did.
Let me know your thoughts.

Cheers

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That's it. If you could for comparison make the color a little more deeper maybe similar to #4 as thats the best way to describe it, If that's possible. you could also make the inner sides that's silver a little darker if you think that looks good.

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Best,

Hi, i had to withdraw my entry cause i used herus leter E made from 3 bars which is so common and overused type treatment that i couldnt believe that he opened the logo court against me and could get banned from the contest.
So heres the new entry with the modifications you wanted.

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I'm sorry my friend. The inside looks a lot better, I would like to see it in a more intense shade so it would really pop out. I also like what you did to the color on the outside I like that shading as well. If you have another idea on doing an E or another way to spell hive please do it and I'm sorry you had to modify that.

Best,

Mare,

since you can't do that E what would be another design of an E you could do that would look cool?

Mare,

on #77. If you could keep the center sphere the same color and change the green and blue to something else what would you do? What do you personally feel would be better for the concept? I still like your overall design a lot.

Thank you in advance.

Like this?

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Also i need to let you now that herus leading entry is too close to my old sold logo http://c24708.r8.cf1.rackcdn.com/491048035-223.jpg

Mare,

What does that mean? The one he's using is another version of one of his old ones. Is there an issue with his now?

Also replace the green with maybe a carbon/steel looking color, the green seems bright and too powerful to me, what do you think?

#145 was very clever but the other designs you have done are so good already

The issue is that is too close to and exiting logo which is not good for both companies yours and certified eco.
It doesn't matter if the herus design is old.
Will post it soon.

like the green in #67 isn't so powerful I think I like that green better

Here it is.

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#146 is large i like the size of it like on #77. Also when you reduce the size place the logo on top use to see that orientation.

Also like on #136 the background color looks more like a metal type color. I don't know how close you can get to that without violating anything. Also on the outside if you were to replace the blue with another color please do that.

I'm really beginning to like your overall design better I just think we need to qweek the colors

or the metal like color in sphere 54? The metal like color makes it look very IT and electronic which may be a good background color in this type of design.

Here it is.

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looks a lot better to me what do you think

Mare,


These colors are driving me crazy!!! I have looked over all the color variations and noticed that the green and blue on #62 look different. Would you please use these colors and place the same orange sphere from 77 inside that?

Thank you.

Here it is.

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Mare,

One of my friends wanted to see #68"s center sphere since it looks like it glowing and place that inside 148's color scheme.

Thanks in advance

Here it is.

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Mare,

I sent you a message for the last entry to make the lines in between darker. I don't know if you have seen it yet. Thanks

Here it is.

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Mare, #191's sphere doesn't look like the same color as #172's sphere. Am I missing something? I wanted that color placed inside #191 but with the dark lines in between like you did in #191's. Maybe my eyes are playing tricks on me:-)

Thank you.

Its the same sphere, maybe it look different cause of dark lines in between. What difference do you see in a color? Too yellow? Want more brown? I just want to inform you that i'm going on a vacation on Friday and wont be here three weeks. The site requires just two final files one EPS and one JPG all other files i'll send you via e mail after the contest is over. If the color of the sphere is the only problem for not finishing the contest i'm sure we can settle that via e mail.

Cheers

it didn't look as yellow to me. Wow three weeks!!! sounds awesome.