Hello Anna - thank you so much for contributing to my case. Great start for sure. The image I'm trying to convey is for someone to identify what kind of business this is right away. The image of someone in freefall will take a minute to process versus someone under canopy (parachute). I'd like to veer away from the freefall aspect for the moment. I'd also like to see a change in the font style. The visual I want to get across is that this is the most exciting thing to do literally on the planet. The image of speed, modernity and cutting edge technology is what I have in mind for this design. If you can incorporate some dark red subtly into the design would be great also!
Hello Anna - I hope you are well! Okay, we really like Entry #32 and are looking to play with the design a little bit.
Edits for Entry #32:
a). Increase the size of the word 'SKYDIVE' by a font size, maybe two font sizes up. Just a little bump up.
b). Definitely increase the size of the word Monroe.
Variations:
We'd like to see some variations with the word Monroe in red and we'd be interested in seeing a tagline in small font below the word Monroe. The tagline is: Experience the Thrill!
In #50, with the tag line I had an idea to show each line smaller, as it would have a descending quality, since when you skydive everything looks smaller from up there.. (I assume, haha)
Really like entry #52! I think you're on to something very strong here. In anticipation of what the final decision maker will say on this, can we expand the word Monroe to be bigger / wider. The final decision maker will see these at the end of the day and I'm trying to anticipate what he's going to say so we can try and pick a winner by tonight (hopefully). Really GREAT WORK here!
Anna - awesome!!! Thank you. Your design is my favorite. I have you ranked #2 as I'm awaiting a revision from another designer whom I have ranked #1 to receive their revision.