Hi Night Owl - this has good potential here. The width of the parachute is a bit too big and somehow I'd like to try and work in the lighthouse. The lighthouse doesn't have to be too literal.....buth #15 is your best thusfar.
Thanks for the feedback. I was not sure if I should try a stylized canopy or go more realistic. Also, I'm trying to show the person in a controlled flight, (I guess coming in / landing) Should I try a more freeform?