Hello Nalapraja - thank you for your submission. Thusfar, you are ranked #1 as you're the only one that read the contest brief to have a feel of what I'm looking for. This is a good first start. I like that you have incorporated a canopy to the logo and have included our swoop man. I'd like to see the swoop man's parachute appear as it does in our logo. I'm not too crazy about the crest that displays the swoop man, I think I'd like to see some change in that area. Also, can you eliminate the word "by." Just having Skydive Carolina will be sufficient.