i like the definition in the body much better, the "S" and "b" are more dominant. I like the flow in color changes and how you designed the "o" in box. It has a bit more energy now, not so flat. Still want a little more punch to it, maybe some brighter colors??? more orange/yellow, it looks a little gold on my computer? (could be my graphics too)
Also can you do some more adjustment to the box behind the figure, I noticed that you rounded the corners which is good.
Thanks,
Heather