Uuhhhggg- this is killing me! I really love your work but it is not testing well with our male evaluators. The improvements were exactly what i asked for and i appreciate that, but we have to make some hard choices. I loved what you came up with. I wish I could start 20 dog parks and keep all of the logos!
Ok so many good options i am having to get really nit picky to make a choice. The dog is a bit washed out relative to the words. Can you maybe outline it? Also his personality is a little chill. Can he be more having a blast instead of kinda happy/satisfied?
#37 thru #40. Revised/simplified my dog and varied the arrangement of the words. Let me know if there's something in my entries you would like changed. Thanks!
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Thanks for the feedback!
Here's one revision of #37. Let me know what else you'd like revised.
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Please let me know if you'd like any revisions. I'd be happy to make changes based on feedback. Thanks!
Pam