Skooby's Indoor Dog ParkLogo Design Contest

So this has been a very difficult decision for me, and part of the reason is that your work is so compelling. I have really really enjoyed it. It makes me wish I could open a second dog park and keep both logos! I want to thank you for your work and your creativity. You were an extremely close second and I have appreciated your submissions. I hope to see more from you in the future!

Thank you!
If you have any suggestions for improvement just let me know.
I'm exploring some other options and will upload soon.
Kind regards,
Bob.

I liked him without the sun behind him more. Your super-dog is a big hit with male evaluators!

You are making this hard for me! I really like it! It hits all of the points on the nail!

Hello.
Thank you for the feedback.
Here is another proposal.
Let me know if you have any comments.
Kind regards,
Bob.

So some of the reviewers felt like the dog looked a little cat-ish, and that at a glance it was almost too detailed. It's a lot to process if this is a sign and you are driving by at 45mph. But i still like the energy and legibility of the font and text.

We have made some tweaks! My advisor has told me to clarify and shorten, so the name is updating to Skooby's Indoor Dog Park and the tagline is shortening to "Always Perfect for Play!"

Hello.
Thank you for the feedback.
Here are changes you requested.
Let me know if they are what you had in mind.
Thank you.
Kind regards,
Bob.

Can I see what the text would look like with Indoor Playland slightly bigger and the banner a different color? We are contemplating doing the business cards on a yellow background.

I prefer this one with the bigger/simpler dog image and no circle

But i like a lot of what's happening here.

I love the dog and the ball here, but just thinking driving by the image might be a hair too complicated/small to take in at a glance at 45mph

Using the leash as a jumprope is a super cute idea! The dog looks energetic and happy which is perfect!

Hello.
Here is my proposal.
Let me know if you want to see any adjustments or changes.
Thank you.
Kind regards,
Bob.