Hi Jelmer!
Thank you for your new design #30 :-)
Unfortunately it isn't what we are looking for. I always say, you must be able to use the logo as a tattoo, and this isn't the case for #30. It isn't professional enough. We need a raw but stylish logo.
#17 on the other hand is more what we are looking for. We even put it on number one because we love the style. But again, it isn't something I would have tattooed on my arm. It isn't sharp and stylish enough. #17 has enough of the raw though ;-) Maybe you could give #17 a more professional look, something like
#33 without losing the raw feeling? Simplify some stuff, make it more a logo then a graffiti piece, but again, not to stylish.
We are looking forward to your interpretation.
Good luck and have fun.
Stephan
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