You're definitely going in the right direction. (#14)
I don't know if the roof thing is going to work - can we try to maybe stretch it out, deconstruct it even more (please see the logo for this site:
http://www.thecrossingsaustin.com/index.php it takes a second for it to appear, but I like deconstructed "pathway" above the name), and somehow place it behind the name? Maybe if you put little flags at the the upper apexes (points) of the tent - it'll look more like a tent roof than a mountain top.
Can you give me examples of different fonts, please - where the "y" and the "a" don't seem more pronounced than the "sin"?
I really appreciate all your work!