I love #11 and #12. Thank you for doing the lolly pop idea. #12 seems a bit too busy - I think the font might be too much, too bold in that version. Could you make the lettering less bold? Or try another font similar to that one?
The font works for #11 though. Maybe because it is spaced on a line? The stick of the lolly pop is lost a bit. I'm open to you introducing another colour somewhere if need be. I don't know what it's missing....
Hi, Thanks for making edits to #15. Could you show me one more change?! Could you incorporate the green that everyone else is using. 1. Could you make a green bow and green stick on the lolly pop. Could you also make the lolly pop stand straight? I don't know where it would look best - on the left of the writing or in middle or above? 2. Could you make the font like #31 and all on one line, alternating colours Simply-pink, Sweet-green, Buffets-pink?