Simply Health and FitnessLogo Design Contest

How about this one?

Seen your other designs, there great aswell, nice work, but still too much going on, looking for the wording to stand out, kept simple but catchy. Thanks for the new ideas tho

Thanks, their really good, but a bit too much going on and is just missing that little sharp edge

And a quite powerful one to consider.

More ideas for you.

I'm also open to fresh imaginative ideas

Their good, but not doing it for me, just doesn't have the edge I'm thinking off, trying to think of how to explain what to do so I don't waste your time. Maybe making the words look fancy, or don't have they on top of each other, or something you feel is appealing to male And especially female who are easily intimidated but an image that also puts them at ease. Trying my best to point ya to what I mean, if you want to message me for more info before drawing it up I'm happy to do that to save time, your work is great, but just missing that little edge I'm after, I'm so bad at describing what I mean, sorry

I got what you mean. How about these two?

I like this one the most outve your ideas but it's still not what I'm looking for. Looks too much like a badge which isn't really what I'm after. Maybe try something with just the words, no background stuff no banner ect.

Got it :) How about these ones? I made the dumbbell parts as a subtle element of the banner. I also added a nice outdoor accent in the white space after "Y" in Simply. What do you think?

It does look good, but the more I'm seeing a big dumbell in all images from everyone the more I feel it's not as user friendly, need it to be more unisex orientated. I'm falling more for ideas that highlight 'simply health and fitness' and with 'mobile personal training services' added in but not as fancy, dumbells and other equipment used if it adds extra to the image but not to over power the writing. These ideas seem to be going better with family and current clients aswell. But thanks very much for the new idea. Also remember it's more outdoor rather than gym orientated. Thanks again though

Hi, I've got another concept for you - what do you think about this one?

It looks good but like i mentioned before it looks too cramped, looks like all the writing is squeezed together, sorry

here are additional variations. I divided the text a bit more and made a handle out of "mobile" just to emphasise is a bit as well. I think it's more readable this way. Really happy with these new ones.

I like both of your new ideas, just a little worried it's pushing all the writing too close together, looks good but that would be my only criticism with it, bet at the same time it does have a nice effect,

I like it, just trying to think what might give it that extra edge but I'll get back to you if I've any ideas, might be along the lines of the actually dumbbell and/or the word simply, these are probably finner touches, but your getting the image write that I was trying to explain, thanks

Thanks for the new approach but I feel it's a bit too big and too much, I'm still preferring the style on #3. Sorry about that. If you used a style the same or similar to #3 but with 'simply sitting on top, the S on the big plate on the left and the Y on the bigger plate on the right. If that doesn't make sense then just think of. Nice catchy way of putting SIMPLY sitting on top. But thanks again.

it's made of 2 colors so this will reduce printing costs, and also there is no overlapping elements so it's embroidery-friendly

Hi, thank you for your feedback. Here is a completely new and fresh approach to your logo. It emphasises movement towards outdoor activities but using a sort of a building shape with a subtle arrow on the bottom and leafs on top. There is also a subtle color emphasis on the word "health". I hope you like it.

I think this would be too difficult to for embroidery. But if the dumbbell was bent slightly more, and the 'simply' going with the bend of the barbell as you have, like its the main word nearly sitting on the top, but with using the number 1 image as its the better one so far

Also, im from northern Ireland, things that are green white and gold/orange or red white and blue can be seen slightly political, I like the orange and the idea of 'simply' appearing different though

The bottom maybe difficult to read at times

I like this one the most so far, I was hoping 'simply health' would be side by side, but I can see why you have done it this way as it keeps the writing big. I like it but feel like something is stopping it going from good to great. If you have any ideas of your own feel free, even if it doesn't involve an item like a dumbell