Simplicity FarmsLogo Design Contest

Thank you for the opportunity to send file. Here is as requested, but i can't do dot trail because seems the concept belong to other designer. Thank You

If you need to see revision as requested, you can rearrange first. Thank you

If not at 1st place, there is no chance to submit sir

Is it possible for you to do a vertical cursive font on Simplicity (also make the "farms" not look so slanty), create a bee trail (small dotted line) from the second i to third i and make the bee smaller and turn it into the actual i dot. Can this be done in the final stage?

maybe any other further direction?

Maybe you need to see something in the logo ?

Has submit some variations. Do not hesitate to give further direction needed

Yes, wait for a moment please

Still really like this one. Would moving the "farms" to the right for balance and putting some color in the bee work?

How about this new one ?

Hi, thank for the feedback. Has submit some variation, how its look?

Really like this concept. Includes all requests elements. My only concern would be the shadow off the animals. Might not translate well into materials. Anyway to remove that and still keep the look.

Thank You, and please do not hesitate to ask or give further direction to develop the logo