Simon's FundLogo Design Contest

my design idea
feedback appreciated

regards
Dennis

Thanks for sharing these designs. They are very detailed and creative. I am looking for a logo that is direct. I want someone to look at it and know that Simon's Fund checks hearts of STUDENTS or CHILDREN. Could you modify this to convey that message to me?

Tnanks for the feedback, submitted some other designs which are direct and simple.
Do check

Dennis