Thank you, we will review and get back to you. Any progress on the 3-d effects? We would love if somehow the shield could look like the "M" is pressed into the shield like an actual signet.
I uploaded 15 interesting fonts for you to consider. One was already in use. Please let me know which one works best in your view. I will be traveling for three days starting tomorrow so I can have trouble with providing revisions during this time as my laptop doesn't handle files that well as PC. I will be back at my office on Monday. However, I'm still available for the next 8 hours.
Thank you again for you detailed feedback. I'm still trying to catch up with your vision. For now I'm posting three entries with new helmet and new sword. They are without text. Tomorrow morning I will provide wider choice of fonts and horizontal layout you requested.
Also, we would like to see some more font examples. Please also how examples with the company name to the right of the shield rather than below it. Thank you.
We have reviewed the designs and are having trouble as we continue to feel the design feels too cartoonish, we are looking for this logo to look as realistic as possible. Are we able to perhaps able to make the design look 3-d? That might give it a more realistic look. Signet means that the "M" would be imprinted into the shield. So if we could make the "M" look that way, it would be great. Please reference the attached picture of the gold ring with an "M" impressed into it. Additionally, we want it to look like the shield, sword, etc. look more realistic.
Also, we would like to see the helmet facing forward, and just have it be a bit simpler. I have posted another logo that was done with a helmet that we liked. Please reference.
For the sword, we would like the top of the sword to be longer and the hilt to extend out longer so it looks more like a cross. You can also reference the logo design attached to see how their sword looks. If the sword even extends over the top of the shield, and the helmet almost rested on the top of it that could be cool as well.
We are trying to convey our wants as best as possible. We appreciate your work on these designs. Let me know of any questions.
From #131 to #137 I was experimenting with less shiny, less prominent helmet. I used outlines, silver, gold, flat colors, gradients and different sizes. Please let me know what you think - which one works best for you.
I'm uploading two versions with similar water pattern you posted. I'm not sure if you want it more or less regular so please let me know what you think. Bad weather is coming here so I will be able to provide next revisions tomorrow..
Thanks again for your feedback. While I see new helmet - I can't see shield with the "M" in the attachments. Cartoonish look comes mainly from thick black outlines I used. I will work on new helmet and post it later today.
Thank you for your updates. We are looking to make sure that our logo has a very upscale, luxury feel. Unfortunately, the knight's helmet is a bit cartoonish for us. We would like to try a different type of helmet, more of a Spartan look with a blue mohawk. I have attached a picture as an example in the contest attachments.
Additionally, the font for the company name should remain larger so as to not be overshadowed by the design. Additionally, the "S" & "P" in the company name should be more accented from the rest of the letters. Make those 2 letters stand out more.
Thank you for attempting the background water designs for the shield, but not quite what we were looking for. I have attached an example of something more in line with what we like. It is attached to the contest attachments. Please see the Shield with the "M" on it.
The overall design is nice, but just looking for it to look less cartoonish and more upscale. Sorry, don't mean to be repetitive, just not sure how else to change the look and feel to attain this.
Again, thank you for all your work on this project.
For now I'm providing versions without helmet - with and without shimmering background. There are also some color and font choices. Now I will draw new helmet. I made one helmet in my early entries but I guess you prefer the type from your brief.
No problem. We understand. We are not wanting the floral patterns we want the design to stay cleaner and simpler. Ultimately, we are looking for this logo to have a very high end, luxury feel, without being too busy, if that makes sense.
Thank you for your feedback. It's after midnight here so I can provide requested revisions in the morning. Please let me know if you want any floral patterns beside the helmet or just helmet.
Hello, we like this design and would like for you to reinstate the logo as it was withdrawn. Here is our feedback on how we can get this design to be closer to what we are looking for.
Could you please provide a rendition with a knight's helmet above the shield?
Please remove the diamond on the "M" where the sword runs through. The sword overlapping the "M" is fine.
The sword could be a bit longer, and shinier. If you could give it a more silver look. Almost gleaming.
On the company name, we would like for the font to be simpler and clearer to read, the first letters of each word can be accented so that they stand out from the rest of the word. Could you show it to us both below the shield and to the side of it?
Lastly, on the shield, any way you could make the background have a simmering feel to it so that it resembles pool water? We like the navy blue, perhaps some thin wavy lines or something to give it that feel.
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We have reviewed the designs and are having trouble as we continue to feel the design feels too cartoonish, we are looking for this logo to look as realistic as possible. Are we able to perhaps able to make the design look 3-d? That might give it a more realistic look. Signet means that the "M" would be imprinted into the shield. So if we could make the "M" look that way, it would be great. Please reference the attached picture of the gold ring with an "M" impressed into it. Additionally, we want it to look like the shield, sword, etc. look more realistic.
Also, we would like to see the helmet facing forward, and just have it be a bit simpler. I have posted another logo that was done with a helmet that we liked. Please reference.
For the sword, we would like the top of the sword to be longer and the hilt to extend out longer so it looks more like a cross. You can also reference the logo design attached to see how their sword looks. If the sword even extends over the top of the shield, and the helmet almost rested on the top of it that could be cool as well.
We are trying to convey our wants as best as possible. We appreciate your work on these designs. Let me know of any questions.
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Additionally, the font for the company name should remain larger so as to not be overshadowed by the design. Additionally, the "S" & "P" in the company name should be more accented from the rest of the letters. Make those 2 letters stand out more.
Thank you for attempting the background water designs for the shield, but not quite what we were looking for. I have attached an example of something more in line with what we like. It is attached to the contest attachments. Please see the Shield with the "M" on it.
The overall design is nice, but just looking for it to look less cartoonish and more upscale. Sorry, don't mean to be repetitive, just not sure how else to change the look and feel to attain this.
Again, thank you for all your work on this project.
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Could you please provide a rendition with a knight's helmet above the shield?
Please remove the diamond on the "M" where the sword runs through. The sword overlapping the "M" is fine.
The sword could be a bit longer, and shinier. If you could give it a more silver look. Almost gleaming.
On the company name, we would like for the font to be simpler and clearer to read, the first letters of each word can be accented so that they stand out from the rest of the word. Could you show it to us both below the shield and to the side of it?
Lastly, on the shield, any way you could make the background have a simmering feel to it so that it resembles pool water? We like the navy blue, perhaps some thin wavy lines or something to give it that feel.
Thank you for your hard work.