Can you give design #124 to me against a black background. If you need to alter the colors feel free to do so. It might also look great in silver tones but please take a creative license to make it look great.
I've enhanced areas to maximize the contrast. In this version I've put the second line in white. This adds to the overall bright look of that other entry - being in black and white.
Note the "Signature" text - it is brighter in general.