I do like the clean black and white design of #2. The martini glass in the design of the scooter is excellent. I like the detail of the side mirrors in #9 - it seem to make the silouette of the scooter more interesting. I like the people element in #13 - perhaps having people makes it feel more like a service when you bring the people in to it
I don't the placement of red works in this logo. The red in the glass feels like it's wine, but the glass shape - which I want to keep - is a martini glass. I don't think the detail in the headlamp eiher - let's keep with the old headlight. I'll post notes on the other two new ones now
A few thoughts - let's look at an angle where the scooter and side car is coming towards us like in the original designs but turned slightly so we see some profile - but not a complete side view like #55. So like they are coming around a turn towards us.
I'd like to see if we can have the driver be a man in a tuxedo rather than a motorcycle suit. Maybe goggles but no helmet. This may be such small detail that wouldn't show in small applications of the logo, but I'd like to try. For the woman let's see if she can be sitting in the sidecar with her legs dangling over the side - like she fell back in to it. I can see her in high heels. Let's try to get these angles and elements and then we can fine tune where we use red. Hope this helps. Looking forward to seeing your ideas. Thanks
Hi there. Thank you. Sorry for my slow replies, I have been traveling . I do like the direction of # 60 .
The drivers' face is hard to make out with the coloring - perhaps his face is more white, and goggles are black? Or we lose the goggles completely?
Let's add the 33 on the side car so we have that on the car and it will make the definition of the actual side car part easier to see,
Let's lose the googles for the girl in the side car. And could her tray have 2 martini glasses and a shaker?
Let's try to integrate the martini glass shape in the front of the sccoter again - not real obvious, but kind of a secret little detail people can spot in the logo.
I think we should be just about there with those little changes. I may look at doing one with the red like you have put in on the bow tie, shoes, and dress, and maybe one with no color at all.
Thank you very much. Looks great. Are there any changes you would suggest or items that concern you?
Thank you. Only a c couple of little edits and we are done! 1. I think we need to make the "33" on the side car a little smaller. 2. Maybe a little more white or definition in the middle section of the scooter, side car, and driver -it all blends together a bit. Nothing big, but just a little definition somewhere. 3. The ladies that work for me say that the shoes on the woman need to be smaller and more curves. 4. We should look to add some lines that create a sense of motion. I have tried to add a pic to the upload file section to show you what we mean.
Quick and easy stuff. Let's do that and get you paid! Thanks