hi there - thank you for your submission! This is a really neat concept, and the scale of the face is spot on...i think i'm just a little iffy on the color palette - it's a bit "cool" for me
Maybe try something a little more natural? maybe kind of an espresso/chocolate brown for the background, if you want to stay dark, or a leaf-ish green (brown and green are sort of our signature)
for the eyes, maybe a little more gold than orange? or greenish gold if you go with a brown background? and maybe the face is shaded sepia instead of grey?
re: the font, the S isn't bad, but the I doesn't seem to match it...a little too straight, maybe? And the rest is just a bit too skinny - too condensed-style...we prefer the letters to be a little fuller...
the only other thought i have is that i'm not sure how i feel about the precise rectangle...maybe the whole thing could be on a "paintbrushed" background - almost like the artist painted a big patch of color first, and then did the design on top of it?
again, the details of the face are really awesome - i actually think that's the best cat-face we've seen so far. thank you so much!
hi chang- unfortunately, my partner doesn't care for the design as much as i do...i really appreciate your time, but i know we're not the only game on LT, and i honestly don't want to put you through a bunch of revisions without specific purpose - i know time is money...i'm not "un-inviting" you, i just thought it only fair that i let you know. all the best! - elena