Hi Jackie,
Here you go #30
You will notice i extended the roof that goes under the big letter " S " to match the curve of the " S " itself and looks more smoother and balanced as one piece overall. Also, i added the " studios " under it in a hanging like sign of the letters above it, simple and elegant touch and still all looks more balanced now all together. Made the brown darker as you requested.
On a side note, i'd hope you understand that here on LT, the designer who introduces a unique approach / concept first in a contest, has the right to develop on it further himself without others coming close or using that unique concept.
In this case, mine is using the letter " S " in a big size combined with a roof and holding the rest of the letters name under it and starts of that big " S " .
So revo's entries are all violating this main rule of someone introducing a unique concept first. Hope you understand where i am coming from.
If you want me to change or try anything else on mine you liked in someone else's who copied my unique approach, let me know and i will do the requested changes accordingly.
Thanks,
Kareem