Hi Rudy, I appreciate the last round of entries. However, we didn't get what we were after. Here are some additional notes:
1. Try enlarging the "J" within the circle.
2. We prefer the more simple lines of the "S" in the first entry, however, please try a version where the ends of the "S" are pulled back to provide a bigger gap against the horizontal line.
3. Try making Showbiz Journal all caps.
4. Try making Showbiz in bold and Journal thin.
Hi, this looks good but we want to see some further iterations:
1. Can you try a few w/ the "J" in different places along the horizontal axis?
2. Please try one where the ends of the "S" are clipped back more?
3. Maybe try thickening either the "S" or "J" to get some contrast
4. We like the idea that this feels like a stamp for the brand. Continue to try other variations as you see fit.
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same for #252 please
Thanks
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J enlarged, gave more spaces between the gap against the horizontal line and also Fonts, fonts can be change if you think they don't fit the icon.
Best
Rudy
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1. Try enlarging the "J" within the circle.
2. We prefer the more simple lines of the "S" in the first entry, however, please try a version where the ends of the "S" are pulled back to provide a bigger gap against the horizontal line.
3. Try making Showbiz Journal all caps.
4. Try making Showbiz in bold and Journal thin.
Thanks!
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Thanks for the feedback , sure i'll revise my entry and submit back asap.
Best Regards
Rudy
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1. Can you try a few w/ the "J" in different places along the horizontal axis?
2. Please try one where the ends of the "S" are clipped back more?
3. Maybe try thickening either the "S" or "J" to get some contrast
4. We like the idea that this feels like a stamp for the brand. Continue to try other variations as you see fit.
Thank you very much.