Showbiz JournalLogo Design Contest

Hi PMC Los Angeles, Thank you so much for your feedback.
These are the change of the name
#619, #620, #621
More feedback are very welcome.
Thank you.

Kind regards,

Marsel

Hi - can you change the name from Showbiz to Sourcing?

Dear PMC Los Angeles, Thank you so much for your feedback.
your contest on Selection Phase, only the Finalist designer (1st ranked) can submit logos.
Thank you.

Kind regards,

Marsel

can you change it to "SOURCING JOURNAL"?

Thanks

Hi PMC Los Angeles, Thank you so much for your feedback. This is the new change, thinner stroke and plain logo
#366
More feedback are welcome
Thank you.

Hi - the box treatment was not quite right. Let's try one that is plain.

Are you able to thin the stroke where the end of the "J" circles near the end of the "S"? More contrast between thick and thin.

Thank you

Hi PMC Los Angeles, Thank you for your feedback.
This are the options
#261, #262, #263
More feedback are welcome.
Thank you

The initials are very strong. Can you try some additional refinements in addition to the bracket idea?