Hi,
We like your design #54.
Can you change the font to something softer and more family friendly? Also, our main concern is that people see the website as "ShoreFamilyFun.com" (or shorefamilyfun.com) and not as just "familyfun.com" Is there anything you can do to unify the text? A one line variant would be ok.
Also, if you think it's appropriate, you can download our organization's corporate font @
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/53088173/omnesGirlScout%20Font%20(Revised).zip. You can't use it for other projects except ours.
Thanks,