Shiver Me Timbers!Logo Design Contest

I just don't like the pirate, sorry I don't think it's worth any more versions for your time.

But I don't want a huge nose and crazy beard either lolol just a cartoon pirate that still looks tough

Yosemite Sam as a pirate was kinda my original thought. He's a cartoon, but still a badass.

I'll keep working on it.

I know I'm not giving much guidance, but that face just doesn't do it for me. His arms are kinda awkward.

I can change when I get home

Still not a fan of the Pirate's face.

Thanks!

Not a fan of the Pirate's face and both arms up. I don't know how to describe why it's not my favorite though.
you might carry the red outline around the wheel.

I'm working on redrawing it in vector.

Okay
Thank you

I was thinking the ships wheel as the back drop, like where you had that starburst pattern

I'm working on a sketch that he is holding the ships wheel with the hook and holding up ice cream cone.

I'll work on it. Thanks

Might try the wheel that steers a ship and the circle maybe running the top half

might like the ice cream in his hand more than the sword.

A sketch to see what you think before rendering it.
Thank you

Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on him. Would you like a sharp hook? Hook holding cone, then other holding sword?
Thoughts on face? Take care

I think I kinda want him to be a little more of a badass Pirate. I don't like the ice cream cone on his hat. Hook is way too thick. I'm not sure I like the list of products at the bottom. I'm not sure I like the starburst in the background., but not sure why.
I do like the wording. That must be a font called Pirate or ship or something, because several have used it. It's good though.

I have some cleaning up to do on it but was hoping to get feedback if the right direction with this pirate? Thank you

That’s what I want. Was the typography easier to read?
Any additional guidance on pirate ??
Thank you

I'll be honest, I don't like it. The pirate, the colors....just doesn't work for me.

I'm still working on his arms holding shaved ice and cone. Thought a fun young pirate would appeal to the kids.

Maybe I'm old and blind but that's hard for me to read. I do like the font

I'm still working the pirate but was hoping to get feedback on the typography. Hope you like it. Thank you - Kent