Yes!! I think we are getting real close now! Can you make the pumpkin more orange? And try making "Shenandoah Valley" a larger font size. I'm curious how that will look.
The end of the ear of corn is too flat. Can you make it go on out to a more natural end? Also, the gray rays in the background, can you make the ones on the sides come out to the edge of the banner around "Produce Auction"? Thanks!
Very Nice!! The ear of corn seems chopped off. Can you extend it to a natural end? And maybe lower down the "Produce Auction" banner, it seems to be getting covered over some by the leaves of the produce.
Thanks!
I have uploaded an example for you to look at named logo demo. It is this logo but the words "Shenandoah Valley" have been removed. In it's place I put a line. Please put "Shenandoah Valley" so that it follows the flatter arch of the line i put in and ends up being wider. (Obviously don't keep the line in your logo)
Can you go back to the font used on #53. Also, what do you think I mean when I say to move the start of "Shenandoah" and the end of "Valley" up and out so it is less rounded? It hasn't happened yet, so I am wondering what you think I am asking for. Thanks.
That is some better. Please elevate the start of Shenandoah and the end of Valley. It will take the wording out to the sides more and give it less of an arch. That is what we want. Thanks. Also, I think the font of the previous one works better.
I showed this to my board of directors last night and they really like what you have going on with this logo. They did request a number of tweaks that would probably make this their favorite logo. 1st: They would like the fonts a little larger, and "Shenandoah Valley" to have less of a curve to it. If "Produce Auction" were longer then it would help all that to work out. 2nd: Three of our best selling produce are tomatoes, pumpkins and sweet corn. They are wondering if you can make the apple a tomato, the fruit in the middle a small pumpkin, and replace the carrot with a partially opened ear of sweet corn? 3rd: Since most produce is thought of for it's bright, vibrant colors they didn't like the muted colors used here. The green should be more of a spinach, or forest green, and the red be deep like a ripe tomato. If you come through with a good version of these changes my board will probably choose your logo based on how they liked it last night. Thanks!
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