I like the way these designs are thought out. One thing to note is that Shelby is looking for a feminine but cool script type font for her name. She does like how Katy Perry did her script font as an direction. Obviously we do not want to copy. I like the feminine side of what you did on the bow as well. The SS is nice too.
She just commented on the SS logo as well. She dies really like that. Doesn't really love it being in a circle or the dot but likes the way they are kind of one thing. Would love to see more on this one.
Also, on the font front, to give you an idea. She really likes the retro look of this kind of font as well from Janice Joplin
We like where this has come. Take a look at the one in first place as well. It has that retro feel that we are looking for. You are right there with that one. Maybe play with it a bit and try some tweaks with 110 and even work the SS into it. Just make sure it is feminine. Good luck and your work is great.