Really like where you are going with this one. The only thing I would like to see you do it to find a way to make the font a script and more feminine. To give you just a general directional idea, Shelby likes the script font thing that Katy Perry does in her name logo. Don;t want to copy but want to just give you an idea of what Shelby likes. Also, try some more pinks and purples/violets in the color scheme if you can. Like where this one is heading.