Thank you for your great logo! We love the illustration, text position and font.
In order to go further, I would like to give you some hints in order to enhance #70: - In order to show the mobility aspect, wouldn't it be great to add wifi waves on the I of IT? - The illustration if already a S so let's try to remove the s from Sharp in the company name. Another suggestion would be to put the S in capital. - Try to give a "Microsoft style" to your starting and ending point of your illustration (the small squares). For instance, instead of simple squares, get inspiration from the official Microsoft logo such as in logos #62, #47, etc...
Thanks a lot for your updated versions. I have again some suggestions : - Could you put the wifi waves on the top of the i letter? - Before the slogan, it'll be great to separe with a vertical line in the same color of the slogan. - Don't resize the illustration to keep the initial size of your first proposition. - When I say to give a "Microsoft style" I just would like to have four small squares as Microsoft logo at the beginning and ending points of your illustration. - Finally, could you bend more a little bit the curves of illustration to make it more round.
dear sir, this is the update #106. regarding your suggestions comment : - adding microsoft logo at the beginning and ending points - adding wifi waves on the top of the i letter. I'm really sorry not to do that point because another designer already made that before me. so, I was prohibited to submit same concept to him. and I need to submit another option of that points I really hope you will understand it.