Vea! Thanks for the entry! #50 really is cool looking. A couple of comments: can the cone top be a little less wide? its too think in our opinion. can you make the shakes and cones part stand out some more somehow? can it just say organic soft serve on the bottom, then a grey dot, then scottsdale arizona? Thanks so much!
By the way, we liked elements of #48, #47 and #40, but we werent fond of the leaf idea. A little TOO organic :) But #50 is really cool and we'd like to work with it!
also, for #50, can we make the inner circle and cone and shake a little smaller, and make the words a little bigger. We'd like more emphasis on the words and less on the cone and shake.
really like the dots around the outside.
also, for the bottom words, if you could make a versions with just organic shakes and cones we'd like to see that. If you need to take up some space, maybe some curved lines that lead up to the words?
Thanks for the new revisions. See the above comments from 10:21AM
Also, for #53 i think we like that one better than the filled in circle of #54, but I'm keeping both high for now. for #53 can you make the shading in the cone and shake match the grey color of the lower words?
as mentioned above, please see if there is a way to make the inner circle and shake and cone a little smaller, and make the words bigger. Also, if you don't mind, we'd like to see all of that with a version that doesnt have scottsdale arizona, in case we expand into other cities :)
#59 is our favorite of the revisions. I dont think we need the inside dotted line though. Also, if you can make the words "shakes" and "cones" pop, stand out, just a little more. Not sure if it needs a new font or what, but we'd like it to stand out more... Thanks!