Shake N VapeLogo Design Contest

Hi ....
I can't submit my revision if you put me in 2nd place....only 1st place can submit....and how many smoke do like?

I like the smoke on my second designers logo. How do I show you

No my friend...the only what we can see is the designer name....not the entry number..
There's something I can help?

Can you see who I have in 2nd place?

alternative style font.

only change the smoke into red and bold the SHAKE and VAPE in slogan.

Sorry my friend, can you described more about in the by- line?

Keep this font but Chang the smoke to red and bold the shake and vape in the by-line

revision font 2

revision font 1

thanks for your feedback shakeNvape1,
here my revision base on your feedback
#53 and #54
any other suggestion?

rgd, cetakaos

Bold the "shake" and not the smoke ....... maybe try the smoke coming out of guys mouth red .. also make font of shake n vape a little more sleek .

hi shakenvape1,
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will Help you to make revision.

best rgd, cetakaos