We have looked at your other work and love what you do when incorporating a black background.
We would like to lose the colour green, add a black background.
The letters 'SF' need to stand out a lot more but be clearer to understand. Colours we like are orange, pink, red & blue. Can use all or just a couple of these colours.
Change the 'SF Capital' font to something more retro and minimal. Don't want this to be a big feature in the design.