Entry 1 is better than entry 2, but I don't feel it really captures any of the detail of the "type" of business we are. It could be for anything, so I don't really think it lets the viewer know the type of business in order to become a recognizable brand.
Thanks so much for the feedback...if possible, could you add more detail to the description of your business to help me focus on some specific ideas that make your business unique? Also, if you have any imagery in mind you'd like to incorporate, please let me know...I'm here to help!
I would like to see a design that is a mix of this design and design #13 from another designer. These are the two that we loke so far and I think that the two together would look better than eigher by themselves. I am also curious to see any suggestions for how it would integrate into business cards and letterhead. thank you again for the design
thanks for your feedback, I built a logo somewhat blending the aspects of my design with the first place entry. I will also submit an alternate version for you as well